Overview IRR: Individual Research Report TMP: Team Multimedia Presentation IWA: Individual Written Argument IMP: Individual Multimedia Presentation Oral Defense EOC Part A EOC Part B Year Timeline Rubrics Templates MLA & APA Citations Common Mistakes Practice
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Common Mistakes Bank

The patterns that cost points across every component, and how to fix them.

Research Research question too broad

"How does pollution affect people?" cannot be answered in 1,200 or 2,000 words, so the paper stays surface level and the Context row caps at a 4. The who, what, where, and when have to be visible in the question itself.

→ Fix: Run the question through the 14 tests in the Research Question Guide, and narrow until it sounds like "water pollution in India," not "pollution."

Writing Summary instead of analysis

Restating what a source says is the 2-point move on the Argument row. The 6 requires explaining the source's reasoning and judging whether it holds. If every paragraph could be titled "what this article said," the paper is summarizing.

→ Fix: After every piece of evidence, add commentary that answers: how does this author get to their conclusion, and does that logic hold?

Writing Evidence with no commentary

A quote or statistic dropped into a paragraph does not speak for itself. Readers score what YOU say the evidence proves, and uncommented evidence reads as filler on every rubric in the course.

→ Fix: Follow the quote sandwich: set up the source's credibility, give the evidence, then explain in your own words why it matters to your claim.

Research Tier 3 sources doing Tier 1 jobs

Blogs, Wikipedia, and opinion pieces carrying your central claims cap the Sources row. The top score requires intentionally selected sources with variety, including scholarly or peer-reviewed work, and a majority of Tier 1 sources at Checkpoint 1.

→ Fix: Run every key source through RAVEN in the Source Tracker, and replace or caveat anything rated Weak.

IWA Forced stimulus connection

Bolting a stimulus quote onto an unrelated argument reads as exactly what it is. The connection has to be thematic and organic: the stimulus should help establish your context or one of your perspectives, not decorate the introduction.

→ Fix: Pick the stimulus theme FIRST, then build your question from your interests within it. At least 2 stimulus sources, integrated where they actually fit.

TMP Four mini-reports stapled together

Individual solutions yoked by a broad theme is the 2-point pattern on Establish Argument. The rubric rewards ONE team claim that every section serves, with logical connection among speakers.

→ Fix: Write the one-sentence team claim on Day 1, tie every slide back to it, and script handoff lines: "Now I'll pass to ___ because..."

Slides Overloaded slides

Walls of text and data dumps are named directly in the TMP rubric's 2-point design language: visuals that display information overload or compete with the speaker. If the audience is reading, they are not listening.

→ Fix: One font family, two colors, big headings, minimal text. Every slide passes the 3-second read test, and every visual advances the point.

Defense Generic oral defense answers

"We worked well together and split things evenly" could describe any group project ever, which is the literal 0-point descriptor on Collaborate Reflect. Specificity is the entire score.

→ Fix: Prep every question in the bank with one detailed instance from YOUR project: a specific source you rejected, a disagreement you resolved, a pivot your question took.

EOC Response does not answer the prompt

Writing about the topic instead of the prompt: Part B asks for YOUR perspective on the theme connecting the sources, not a report on the sources, and a thesis already represented in the packet caps Row 1.

→ Fix: Underline the prompt verb, stake a debatable position the packet does not already hold, and state it early with "because."

EOC A Sequence words instead of logic words

Q2 answers that earn a 4 list claims with "first, next, finally." The 6 explains why one claim leads to or depends on the next: the difference is not knowing more claims, it is showing how the claims build a chain of reasoning.

→ Fix: Swap sequence words for connection verbs: establishes, builds on, complicates, reveals, concludes.

Conventions Citation mismatches

In-text citations that never appear in the bibliography, bibliography entries never used in the text, or "studies show..." with no attribution: each one caps the Citations row at 1 or 2 points out of 3.

→ Fix: Before submitting, run the three-way check from the rubric guide: consistent Works Cited style, clear internal citations, and every internal citation matched to a bibliography entry.

EOC Walking through sources one at a time

Source A paragraph, Source B paragraph, Source C paragraph: that structure caps Row 3, because synthesis means at least two sources in conversation inside the same paragraph, serving YOUR claim.

→ Fix: Organize paragraphs by YOUR claims, not by source. Use one source to clarify, complicate, or push back on another with the sentence frames in the Rubrics section.